|Reviews for Brently|
| angrylove888 6/17/10 . chapter 1
Well, I liked it, although it felt pretty complete to me. I can't see it turning into a story, maybe because the ending of the prologue doesn't make you curious to find out what happens next. It would be interesting, though, to see how you would turn it into a story. I can't see it, but maybe you have a unique vision about where you want this to go. If you decide to continue, I would love to read more.