Sounds interesting...I'd definitely like to read more. I'm a sucker for fallen angels or any kind of stories like that (Hush, Hush is my latest addiction). I hope you decide to post this on the internet :-)

Hmm . . . mystery! I like the whole angels/demons thing. I think you should go for it!

i think its a good start for a promisisng story- i really love your stories :)