|Reviews for i am male,|
| Doxie Doll 7/7/10 . chapter 1
| i am female 6/29/10 . chapter 1
bloody brilient. this story is true for me, just with the opposite gender...hurts like a bitch. you're beautiful, when you sleep my favorite part.
| Middy-The-Kitty 6/19/10 . chapter 1
I like this, the theme is over all very nice. However, don't forget basic grammar. Capitalize your I's, capitals at the beginning of sentences, and you might want to break up a few of your sentences so that they're not run-ons.
But hey, aside from the grammar, this story was a pleasant read for me. :3 Bravo!
| nevermore199 6/18/10 . chapter 1
This is really awesome. I love it. And I'm sure it's a true story to someone.
| Creeping Collarbones 6/18/10 . chapter 1
I like this. I like how to the point this is. Some really nice descriptions.
you're beautiful, when you sleep.- I like this. Simple and real.
True story, maybe? Hm.
| in the city of neon and chrome 6/18/10 . chapter 1
this i like. i can relate to it exactly. favorite part: "you're beautiful, when you sleep."