cute!

AAAWWW! Short and sweet! ;)

My, but you do have a lot of oneshots.

I especially liked the last line. :)

OMFG SO CUTE AND YFM HTCFFTFHCJT LOL HE DIDNT EVEN MNOW HIS NAME LOL AND AND THE END WAS SO FLUFFY AND AWKWARD AND SO CUTE.

THOUGH I HAD BEEN HOPING FOR STEAMY LOCKER ROOM SMEX.

IT TOOK ME 4 TRIES AND REREADS TO ACTUALLY GET THE / THING.

I SHOULD SLEEP NOW BYE

/fail review/half asleep

Oh my gawd. Oh my gawd. Please, PLEASE change ringed to rang in the first sentence? Please?

Other than that, it's pretty fugging adorable.

Very cute. Some mistakes, but the over-all adorableness covered them up nicely.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

AWW THAT WAS SO CUTE.

I have determined that I am going to make a community filled with cute sports slash. And. Well, so far it will only contain this and Completion by Ella, but... people will see that I have a community for sports slash and then they'll want to write it so that I'll put it in my community. Obviously.

Hahaha, but in all seriousness, this was super adorable. I love your use of parentheses :) Very cute. I love it. Tell Gabe happy fuckin birthday for me, will you? :D

Loved it! I love sweaty boys! EW! Not really! But, this couple is cute. I loved how he cared enough to go and see about him! True love! And the ending was adorable! How they made it official instead of more fooling around. And in my opinion I think it would be worth it to get sick just as long as i got to be with the one I want to be with! Loved it!

This was my favorite-est. Fo shiz. You know how I like football boys. And you did a brilliant job. I also like sick gay boys... (which is, yes, weird and creepy, but WHATEVER) ... so that's a bunch of good things in one story, plus adorable awkwardness. And, yeah. Sweet. I shall go read your review for TWISY now.. :D