Two laughs in this chapter:

1) JC peeking through his fingers as he watched her video.
2) Sarah contemplating slipping a note to her parents.

This chapter was more plot-heavy, than humourous, but I'm anticipating to see more of that sharp tongue later on. I've been convinced to progress to chapter 3. Wow. Look at me. Giving you a minute-to-minute progress chart, but it's necessary, because then you can see from a mile off, if I'm about to bail, or fall to sleep and come back in the morning to finish what i started...

(Bank holiday 2moro. Woohoo.)
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New reader over here :) Make way. Make way. I don't know how this chapter was like BEFORE the edit, but I'm loving this version! Sarah's humour is bang on. I was expecting her to die, and everyone start reacting all hysterically, but the various ways of her family/friends/strangers is amusing. Funniest bit was when she was all excited about making the headline news and now being seen as a "tragic young woman."

I entered this with little expectations, but I'm well up for chapter 2 now!

Hd khrhdkevib

best book ever i skipped 2 so now im going to the 2nd one but im crying cuz JC what happened to him lol

omg im scared

Im finishing this book today and u only have 3 dang make em into a movie this book IS BOSS

This is just the beginning oh god I WANT MORE WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER OH NVM

HA I WAS RIGHT I WAS RIGHT, I worked out, it was kylie and JC ages ago!
Cute story I love it.

Really liked this story. Wish this chapter wasn't so rushed.

Wasn't sure if I would go beyond the first chapter, but this is so well written that I want to read the rest!

I like the humor. Ur angel is funny.

Amazing story and hilariously funny, I loved it!

The story rOcked at first you know plot-wise. Mitch had me cracking. But then it just turned 180 degree ridiculous then ended. Thee could habe been far greater potential in this but what's done is done. Anyway good luck on your next work. Piece of advice expect the unexpected is a good climax for a story but "total-opposite-yet-not -really-unexpected -since-there's-just-no-other-character- twist is lame. Sorry

aww...that was nice. It was very sweet. The best part for me was that it was a nice quick read. I totally expected the Kylie thing, but JC? Not so much. Good job.

Just on thing, though? Are you sure it's only rated-T? You could at least put some notice at the beginning for it's extremely crude language, but, oh well.

I liked the story. :)

Well, I have to say, this is the first time I'm incredibly glad that a character died :) Even though I know this story is under the Romance/Humor genre, I was just so worried that Mitch would end up moving on and Sarah would have to be with JC who- while at first, and I mean first appearance first, I was somewhat okay with- was never really right for her. I had so many theories during this story and none of them turned out right (thank goodness, they were terrible). The actual written happenings are much more to my tastes :)

keep up the fantastic writing!

yours,

D&Gxxxx