Well, I have to say, this is the first time I'm incredibly glad that a character died :) Even though I know this story is under the Romance/Humor genre, I was just so worried that Mitch would end up moving on and Sarah would have to be with JC who- while at first, and I mean first appearance first, I was somewhat okay with- was never really right for her. I had so many theories during this story and none of them turned out right (thank goodness, they were terrible). The actual written happenings are much more to my tastes :)

keep up the fantastic writing!

yours,

D&Gxxxx

I should have expected something like this so they could be together... but it was still kind of surprising! Loved it though :)

Aw Mitch was so cute! Yup, definitely bipolar.

This is such a cool concept! I love your writing style, it's funny but not pointless or anything. The jokes fit into the plot well. Gonna read the next chapter now. :)

Nice story! It reminds me of 'Radiance' by Alyson Noel, which I really like sos i enjoyed this one too.

Who was to say his cat, Tux, wasn't secretly working for the bad side?

The ending was so sweet! I'm glad Mitch and Sarah ended up together. And I have to say, I really did not expect that with JC. Great story!

I really like this story so far, I'm interested to see how it continues. Your writing is great, it amuses me haha. Anyway, now to continue to reading!

Wow! This story was edited on my birthday!

'We walked into the light together.' So swet! I hope Kylie's OK.

OMG! I knew it! I knew it! I knew it! I knew it!

Mn.! THis is getting intense!

I personally think Mitch is gonna die.

Now I'm happy for Kylie. That she was able to acknowledge Mitch and in some way, kind of move on too.

I like this chapter. I feel so bad for Kylie. Maybe in the end, Mitch can end up with her and JC and Sarah stay together.