|Reviews for Leaden|
| GirlWithTheBrokenSmile 6/26/10 . chapter 1
Ahh the all too familiar woes of writer's block. Artfully described, might I add. Absolutely loved the last line. It tied everything up nicely and ended the poem with a slightly haunting note.
My only complaint would be line three. I would suggest breaking it up differently to make it flow better. It's beautiful as it is, of course, but I had to read that line a few times to comprehend it.