|Reviews for Raven's Will|
| Brian 5/2/13 . chapter 3
Great job so far, but you need to keep going. :)
| katayoku.no.tori 12/23/12 . chapter 3
Please post more of this soon! Your story is amazing, and you writing style gets you addicted to the story! I've already read I Am A Flyer 3 times, and I really want to know what happens next.
Raven is the most interesting character ever
| Guest 10/16/12 . chapter 3
I'm back. You're a really good writer...I hope you write more soon.
| Seranade 8/6/12 . chapter 3
Great! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! I absolutely loved the first story. And this sequel seems very promising:)
| mOrGa1998 5/26/12 . chapter 3
I love this story! I can't wait until you post another chapter.
| xxRivaxx 11/22/11 . chapter 3
wow took me awhile to catch up...I knew he wouldn't join them in the end...is Raven really dead? :( please update this story soon xx
| atejhaegfv 11/15/11 . chapter 3
wish you would update, this story is awesome.
| Best Wishes 8/2/11 . chapter 3
| Moonlite Star 12/26/10 . chapter 3
now caught up. :) well, jett's gotta start somewhere. I'm curious to see how this alliance will work, and can't help but wonder if Jett knows what he's getting himself into. Though he does seem more the type to act first, think later. Of course, I'm looking forward to Raven's return as well (he IS returning, right?)...I miss Raven, haha.
There's something about these sequence of events though that strike me as off. I can't quite put my finger on why...but I guess part of it has to do with him diving into trying to save the world so quickly after escaping the , now that he's found some allies, it should be ok...
Anyway, I look forward to updates. Keep writing! Thanks for sharing this. )
| E. K. Drennan 12/22/10 . chapter 3
Ah, poor Jett! See! things are already getting better! sorta...not really? xD
Loving it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
| The-Angel-Illusion 12/12/10 . chapter 3
Nice chapter. It must really suck to be Jett right now. Actually, his life hasn't exactly been a scenic stroll, so life as usual? Love the chapter. D
| dru83 12/10/10 . chapter 3
Yay another chapter! This looks good, I only spotted one thing worth editing. In this paragraph the word "that" is unnecessary:
The white flyer's mouth dropped open in shock. Why? Why are they so stubborn? I thought they'd be different [that] than the people from before! He turned, looking over to where Tarrod and his fallen friend were watching him with no small amount of confusion and apprehension.
Otherwise, it's a nice chapter, keep up the good work.
| Silver Shadowbreeze 12/9/10 . chapter 3
You finally updated! Can you blame me for checking my inbox every day for this? I've already re-read the first story more than once!
I can't say the reception was exactly as I expected, but this works just as well! Silence can be just as telling as loud explosions. I gotta say, that fuse was disarmed quite nicely. Your use of words makes sure none are wasted, which is really useful. Now let's see what this leads up to in Jett's future...
| MeAsIAm 8/19/10 . chapter 1
First off, I would like to suggest that you add a brief summary of the last story at the top, because this is a sequel. The start is interesting and the rest of the chapter follows suit. The description was really good. I normally find the plain descriptions of the MCs like 'He had long brown hair and deep blue eyes' really boring, but here, it think it went well with the story.
via the roadhouse
| Mandyla 8/18/10 . chapter 2
The selection of detail in the first part really emphasized Tarrod's drive to save his friend and the grimness of their situation under the rubble. I honestly didn't expect Jett to actually recognize him when they reached the surface. I was a little confused by the lines in italics, though. I'm curious to see how this cliffhanger turns out.