Hey,

Honestly, your writing is so good! It's really forward, and kind of just jumps out at you, giving awesome visul imagery, and even kind of makes us feel what the characters are feeling. Awesome poem and chellenge entry! :)

ranDUMM

This is very meaningful and interesting. I think all writers can connect with this. Great job. :D

Interesting and I love the wording, but I don't quite understand what the guy was. :s

I like it Shuna, you did a very good job. I love the story in the poem and it is so right. We wrights, teller of stories, are nothing but the world's greatest liars. :)