wow, maybe she's just menopausal. or however you spell that. i was about to be so angry, but then it just stopped because that does suck for his madre. really tho, if she had just got an ultrasound quick because it doesn't make sense to get pregnant when you're sort of old!, NONE of this would've happened. then you think of the flip side where maybe its good for the character brett to finally be figuring himself out and all that. but it really just gets you a little frustrated. especially since i just thought of all that right now, while writing this. ugh! frustration! but like i've said, i love it so much, i do i do. (:

can't wait for the next update, i'm excited to see what goes next.

JB

Didn't expect that... I mean with the parents and all that... thanks for the update... the ch wasn't that short plus an update is an update - and thank you for the update btw! Silly silly Brett... of COURSE you're gay lol you should definitely test out this new theory by kissing Zach see how that feels lol jk

oh my goodness! i totally wasn't expecting that. i feel stupid for it but for real i was surprised! damn i am loving this story! you are such a great writer, i swear so many things in this have been so unexpected but it still just works. and its amazing. i love this story! wow! i'm just in shock. when john was talking like he loved brett like a brother i was like oh damn that sucks for brett because i think he was thinking about different love. but then john goes and kisses him! i really think they both are just confused. it's great tho because i still have no idea who brett is going to end up with, it's a mystery. haha. (:

can't wait for the next chapter! i'm really looking forward to it.

JB

I really like this story. I love both John and Zach though, so I can't decide which one I want to end up with Brett. :-( Can't wait for the next chapter!

So... I think of you as my brother! Let kiss! . Didn't know you were into incest! yeah well... neither did I... actually I have someone in my life already and I love HER so I don't really know... gah! It's all your fault Brett, you just looked so adorable with the tears and emotion in your eyes!... I'm going to go now... uh... I'll.. *runs away and texts John* 'We have to talk... later... when can you?' *gets distracted by sexy hunk of vet! My dog! I think your diagnosis was wrong the meds... they aren't really working... maybe it was something else... something treatable? Yeah... Zach: *looks into to eyes... want* Omnom *kissing ensues* Brett calls John dazed... Hey man... I don't like you that way... but I think I might have a thing for Starbuck's doctor... Is that okay? John: Actualy that works out perfectly for me... the kiss was... a mistake... I'm actually with someone... Sorry man... uh.. so your gay?

Thanks for the update!

this is all so unexpected.. but i LOVE it. absolutely freakin love it all. i have no idea how it's going to end up and that's the best thing ever. i can honestly say, i've never read a story on here where i was this unsure of who would end up with who. and it's amazing, i love it. (: fantastic, can't wait for the next!

JB

Rawr Brett he needs to make things more clear... Like he cleared things up, and it was happy, but then he goes and make Zach misunderstand again... Gah! oh wells... I'm sort of worried about Starbuck TT-TT D hope she's alright... Thanks for the update!

I'm thinking Brett likes to dig... his grave is looking more and more complete... actually it's gone past grave and is probably more tomb like status... he could probably have a pity-party in it P lol I hate when stress gets to you and you start saying things you don't mean and doing things that you normally wouldn't... Job hunt next chapter? or maybe some soul search and apologies... he has a few to make that's for sure... Thanks for the update! Ciao for now! (ignore the rhyme in that last bit I didn't want it to just happened... now it seems lame... but oh well)

she is right though. he's acting like a brat. he won't have his mother taking care of him until he's 30, you know. grow up, brett.

also, if he is in such financial need and trouble. he could ask his parents for help, just because they can't afford to have him live there, it doesn't mean they don't care anymore! don't be a drama queen, brett!

thanks for this filler chapter. thanks a lot. I got so excited. haha. I thought it'd be brett and john talking things through. *winkwink*

or at the very least, zach being there. at least then he'd have to face the situation. :(

oh well, update soon!

i get where his madre is coming from, i do. but it doesnt mean i have to like her. because i just dont. haha (: i can't wait for the next chapter. yay!

JB

Yes Brett, growing up does suck lol. Maybe now he will get his act together lol. Great job!

What an awkward, yet insightful, chapter lol

oh my god, oh my god, oh my god! does he love john? I really hope he does. john's just too hopelessly cute to pass up. I kind of assumed from the beginning it would be an unrequited love thing but I thought it would be brett being in love with john not the other way around! haha! it was unexpected. it was still very cute though.

also, I'm not sure how zach fits into everything. I thought that brett wouldn't like john and that he'd choose zach or something but now, it doesn't seem that way. hope things work out between john and brett.

also, if john loves brett and stuff, why was he kissing rhona? whaat? I wasn't quite sure if he loved brett in a platonic way or if he was IN love with brett. 'tis confusing, 'tis is.

I hope you update soon because this story is too lovely to forget about! :)

No Zach! He loves you not John... I think... hope? maybe? Dunno... Thanks for the update! Poor waiter is going to have to clean up after him... anyways! they may just have to make other plans for the night... or not just sort of cut to the next scene que in blaring headache waking up naked somewhere that ISN'T home! freaking about his pups and then looking for a job or something... thanks for the update! *wavess* til next time

i'd like to say im smart and i know what the answer to the question was, but no, i dont. haha. brett's a loser, yes, i know its because of his problems and he's sort of breaking under anxiety but i'd be surprised if zach will like him after this.

so also, was that a brotherly/friend love john was talking about in the other chapter, or was it romantic? im pretty sure zach was talking romantic in this one.

dude, this wasn't supposed to be even this long because where i live it's 7:48 AM and i haven't slept. so im out. i can't wait for the next chapter to come out, for sure. (:

JB