Beautiful! I love it! I write stuff like this all the time whenever i feel like i need to get my emotions out. Its a really good technique and i hope it works for u too!

there's a beautiful sentiment here. it's also quite sad. despite it's shortness, u managed to convey so much, like how special a person can be to someone without anyone else knowing, the power of memories, and what becomes especially important in a person's last moments. good job!

That is so nice! Really short but i really love it!