|Reviews for The Hero|
| Margaret Casady 7/16/12 . chapter 1
This story as made me think in a whole new way. The imagery of the child abuse is heart reechoing and powerful. I was a bit confused abut who the hero was. It was a mouse the whole time. Oh, just got it! :-p. Good Job!
| HeroineHiding 12/21/10 . chapter 1
This is a really good piece. I've always been attracted to the concept of heroes...pieces like this mean a lot to me. You have truly captured a sense of what heroes are in words.
| oliehksmith 6/28/10 . chapter 1
that was great jess! xx
| ShadowHatter 6/28/10 . chapter 1
That was quite a clever twist at the end; I was sure it was a neighbor, and I wasn't at all expecting a mouse. Some suspension of disbelief required, but you make it fit within the world you set this in. I enjoyed reading this, and the style you wrote it in set everything quite nicely. :)
| Alexander Price 6/27/10 . chapter 1
Short, sweet, nice, perfect.
More poetic than fableatory.
But fits in well, good job, keep it up!
| Yumi-chan-likes-chainsaws 6/25/10 . chapter 1
this was a very very good story! Oh how one mouse is so underestimated... good!