I can't wait for you to update! I really want to see what happens when Sophia gets back to the Malaki's. I can see you have a very good way with words and your grammar is spot on. Keep up the good work and please updated soon!

I'm very much enjoying The Fallen King so far, you're a very good writer.

I love the character development-

Can't wait to read more.

awwe, poor sophia! That was a nice installment- now i want to know who killed her father, this is really good- keep up the good work :)

This is brilliant.

I love a childs perspective to begin a story, always has interesting effects :P

I instantly like sophia's character, I hope i get to see her grow up! I like the atmosphere you've created, very easy to picture and to get hooked. Was just like reading a book to be honest.

I'd love to see more development of the story and what's to come, in the next installment.

Your grammar and spelling, everything is emacualte!