|Reviews for Thimbles|
| pbj13 6/28/10 . chapter 1
The diversity of the length of lines add to the complexity of Peter's thoughts. And yet, it's so simple, too. He's so confused and alone without his world. I love the line "Silly little man, this is not you Neverland" and onward. I like how the speaker is almost criticizing Peter, about kissing a faerie, but she's sympathetic too. It means (I guess) that she's kind and forgiving, which is goo, now, huh? Great job!
| Open your eyes Chopstick 6/28/10 . chapter 1
no ryhmes! oh man...i'm a big peter pan fan, and so the summary caught my attention. It was a good poem. The lines were uneven in length- it shows the complexity in peter's thoughts. It didn't ryhme though! oh man...as peter pan is a disney movie/book, i wished it wold have rymed. But, i guess it just didn't work for you, so i won't dwell on that. Good job. I like the diction in here.
Mind R&R my story "A princess summoning?" Thanks