OMG good. I can so see this. It just makes perfect sense, all of it, and you easily write as well as Phillippa Gregory.
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Oh effing excellent! Good girl, Margie, to remind him how a casual light word could end in a headless woman. Boy I can't wait to see where you'll take this. To the first child? Further? I like the Anne of Cleves interaction. She was mispainted and misjudged in history, I think.
Why does nobody ever tell us WHAT the bawdy jests and remarks were ?
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I really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the next one.

I Loooooove this so far and can't wait to see if she ends up with Paul or Edward... I kinda hope it'll be Edward, but only cause Paul was sort of cheating.

Alright, you have to have her marry Edward now! - I mean, it's utterly inevitable!

ooh my goood! i've i'm so glad i've found this story! i've always loved the idea of lady jane and edward getting married (even though they're cousins...) so i hope to see lots more of her even if her and edward dont have a romance :) one things bugging me though, elizabeth was certainly not pretty in real life, even though here you describe her as beautiful. still, i love this story sooo much already and i've only read one chapter so thanks!

I really liked this update! Great job!

Weee, I freakin' hope she relents and marries Edward. I mean, she'll be queen! :D Anyways, keep up the good work ;)

The story line is really picking up here. I can't wait to see what happens!

Marvellous! I expect you to update soon ;)

Nice work. Just a few little typos here and there, but nothing to really worry about.

This is really good as far.

damn, you do a good job with this. You have the language, it's like watching the Tudors, damn near.
Very good intrigue and back biting. If I had lived in those times, I would not have wanted to live at Court.
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Poor girl, yes it's possible for a human to love, or to feel what they think is love, for two different people. Well-written.
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oh dang, is that the direction it's going? I'd hoped to see Queen Margaret Tudor...
Well, only one more chapter, then whatever you write after that. I will read it and see how it comes out, no matter who you walk her down the aisle with. At least if Margaret marries Paul, show us who Eddie marries...
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