Reviews for Vindicated
klippie 12/21/10 . chapter 7
wooho! new chapter! It's been a while though, haha..

It was nice to learn a bit more about the creatures in the house :)

update soon!
xoxlizzie 12/14/10 . chapter 6
I love this story! It so so much fun to read! Please, please update as quickly as you can!
Chasing Happiness 12/13/10 . chapter 6
I really like this story.

Update soon :3
DVL 11/20/10 . chapter 6
:D Love it! -
Wanabet 10/21/10 . chapter 6
I dont trust Lupin, or the cat, or Amato. Mainly because Lupin owns them, but still. And originally hated Chad now am like uh someone gonna help him? Update soon.
NoodleNation 9/23/10 . chapter 6
Woo sexy smutiness. :)
klippie 9/23/10 . chapter 6
Whoa.. it's not really what I expected when I first started reading, but so much better! really interesting story. keep up the good work!
Esquirella 9/22/10 . chapter 6
I like Lupin's strangeness! And I don't know why, but I don't feel bad for Chad. I think it stands to reason that the other wizard claimed him anyway, so what could Alex do anyway? Killing the wizard would kill Chad, no?
bunniez17 9/21/10 . chapter 6
Oh very sexy chapter! Only if Alex would realize that he's totally meant to be with Lupin lol Now there's going to be a whole lot of drama with the other wizard lol hope you update soon :)
ricemidget 9/21/10 . chapter 6
that was awesome! 83

poor chad, i bet he's a bottom thats why he needs "help" lols cant wait to read your next chapter )
yaoi8808 9/21/10 . chapter 6
OMG! I was so happy when I saw this update in my email! I LOVE what is happening so far, and it's so hot too (which only makes the plot even better). The only thing I ask of you is to make sure to update sometime soon! :)
Ratts 9/21/10 . chapter 6
I likie :) always do!
Esquirella 9/8/10 . chapter 5
So Lupin made a contract with Amato, but Kiki is a magical creation ... ? And what will Alex be? A possession, or a mate? I think I know the answer, but I bet Alex is wonering.
closed.quarters 9/8/10 . chapter 2
Lupin is so cheaky! TEEHEE I really hope these two end up together *squee*

PS: I just realized that fictionpress only posted the first part of my review on protector and I spent 10 minutes writin the whole thing! *cries*

(Why didn't I copy before pressing submit why)

In the 2nd and 3rd part I talked about how I loved your story and that it was a crime against readers everywhere if you didn't consider a sequel (a long one! With many many chapters)! It has too much potential. The whole is just so very well thought of! All your characters are well built, the readers can identify with them, but at the same time we could learn so much more about them.. I loved how you gave a glimpse of the secondary characters' personalites and/or lives, and you could go into much more detail in the sequel, portraying their relationships and so on.

There are so many doors left unopened and you obviously have the villain of the story aka Nobu and Aiko's mother and her boyfriend (or not.. maybe a new villain? someone from a character's past?). On a side note: I think Aiko is adorable and I loved how she gave Grisha a nickname just after meeting him and then Nobu got jealous! haha!

So sorry for the long review, please don't hate me ;-;

Lupin is so cheaky! TEEHEE I really hope these two end up together *squee*

PS: I just realized that fictionpress only posted the first part of my review on protector and I spent 10 minutes writin the whole thing! *cries*

(Why didn't I copy before pressing submit why)

In the 2nd and 3rd part I talked about how I loved your story and that it was a crime against readers everywhere if you didn't consider a sequel (a long one! With many many chapters)! It has too much potential. The whole is just so very well thought of! All your characters are well built, the readers can identify with them, but at the same time we could learn so much more about them.. I loved how you gave a glimpse of the secondary characters' personalites and/or lives, and you could go into much more detail in the sequel, portraying their relationships and so on.

There are so many doors left unopened and you obviously have the villain of the story aka Nobu and Aiko's mother and her boyfriend (or not.. maybe a new villain? someone from a character's past?). On a side note: I think Aiko is adorable and I loved how she gave Grisha a nickname just after meeting him and then Nobu got jealous! haha!

So sorry for the long review, please don't hate me ;-;
closed.quarters 9/8/10 . chapter 1
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I have no words!

Scratch that, I have 4 words: MUST READ MORE NOW!

PS: If anyone other than the author is reading this, GO READ HER OTHER STORY "PROTECTOR" and please please post a review if you like it so she'd consider writing a sequel! I promise I'll send you all cookies
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