Please update

part 16?

part 16 ?

awesome chapter!

OMG OMG OMG-EXCELLENCE THRU AND THRU! I am sooooooooo ENAMORED of this story Crystalynn! ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! I am CONFUSED as to why Chris/Aya is so ANGRY at Estelle but am looking forward to finding out! I LOVED how Kintra MISUNDERSTOOD Kuro's request-it had me chuckling! I am also going to ASSUME that it was Kintra who killed Kuro's hunters-BRILLIANT JOB AS USUAL!

Kuro is now just too cute

I feel so special. :) Thank you for updating. This chapter was incredible and I really enjoyed it.
The beginning was really interesting and neat. And I feel so bad for Estelle for not understanding emotions, something we consider so basic and human. I can understand Chris/Aya's frustration, but of course a part of me wants to hit him upside the head until he sincerely apologizes. Then, as always, I enjoyed the Heather/Kuro scenes. Kuro has to be one of my favorite characters in Without Light. As with the last little scene at the end, I loved it for being so creepy and intriguing. "DAYUM" is completely right!
Again, thanks for sharing. Keep up the excellent work and I look forward to your next chapter.

- I now mostly buy via kindle

- I am more prone to romance, but that is particularly based on the heather and kuroshi dynamic. The other minor characters are just not as interesting to me... I know you hate this, and will probably not take my comment serious after, but I normally skip those other scenes unless its a memory or important references on his brother.

I would like to see romance because I'm a big fan of it and especially of heather and kuroshi 3 and well I do love buying books I can physically feel the cover of and such but I wouldn't mind buying this story as an Ebook as lately everyone reads everything on their electronics *cue nostalgic feelings for good old fashioned books * . As for 400 PGs I think it's fine any amount is fine , I love this story regardless :D hope to read the next chapter soon oh and I totally understand my computer crashed a few months ago and I actually did lose all I had in there :( but in glad u didn't or I would be crushed since i love this story so much . Sorry for writing u a freaking essay in response to 3 simple questions lol

Dai-Light

I just wanted to stop by and say that I love what you've written so far. Your story is amazing and I'm very eagerly waiting for more! Anyway, keep up the great work!

when is the next chapter coming i realy can't wait

DAMN IT GIRL-this-oh my-this chapter was AMAZING-and hell if I want to admit-QUITE HOT! Heather is falling (to an extent) for Kuro and he for her-PERFECTION Crysta-you ARE GOING TO GO FAR as an Author my FRIEND-you are UTTERLY and SIMPLY BEYOND AMAZING and so is YOUR WRITING! I BOW to your GIFT!

update soon:).

brilliant!

I'm kind of sad because I really liked the old names, but I also kind of like the new names, so you know. :)