|Reviews for Running Water|
| Brix Herrera 7/1/10 . chapter 1
With all due respect, this is going to be constructive.
Nice story. I felt like I was watching a classic horror movie with it's premise. You definitely left some parts to be further explained. So yeah, a chapter 2 is a must!
You have to develop on creating an atmosphere while storytelling.
Overall, you've got potential. Keep it up. :D