|Reviews for Witch|
| Shalarean 7/10/10 . chapter 1
Cute. I'd love it if I were younger.
| Sagesushirou 7/4/10 . chapter 1
Hmm. It is melodical, you succeeded in making a rhymed poem. Reading it...huh. The whole idea is not clear, nor visible. I think it's also too short. You need more emotions, or to show the complete lack of emotions in the characters of the poem. Excluding that, it is a nice poem, you have used matching words to tell this story.