|Reviews for To Unlock His Heart|
| rowleyg 2/20/13 . chapter 1
I am extremely impressed by your work. You left me wanting to read more -an important gift as an author. Let me know if you are ever interested in publishing. To clarify, I am contacting you, not for self-publishing spam but traditional publishing. Send me a PM for more information. Good luck writing!
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| FamishedNight 11/18/11 . chapter 29
Awesome! Update soon!
| Tukki 9/20/11 . chapter 29
A great story! I wonder why I haven't found this one before. It's pretty slow-paced, but it doesn't really bother me (the slower the story, the longer it takes to finish, the more for me to read!).
I also like that though Nikolai has his traumas and bottles up a lot of it, he still speaks about things and opens up little by little. What I'm trying to say is that I like how he makes an effort, and doesn't just wait for someone to accidentally find things out or angst about it all alone.
I do hope that he hasn't totally forgotten his ex-neighbours, though. The gymnastic teacher was nice. I also wonder how the dad will be.
I hope you'll continue this :)
| Krisu 10/13/10 . chapter 29
I really rarely review anyone's stories, but I just had to do so with this. I like totally read all your chapters at one go and I'm definitely paying for it tomorrow 'cause it 4 o'clock. heh.. any way. I love the way you write. You have this gift of getting the reader mind into the story 100%. Very good writing. I can see those thing happening and feel the emotions. captivating. I just don't get why you haven't have more reviews, 'cause your writing is so brilliant. It's kind a hard to try explain my feelings in English but hopefully you get something out of this. Keep writing, love you work. Definitely reading your other work too. I'm a fan }
Krista from Finland ]
| blackrose214 9/27/10 . chapter 29
lol, Herman being Nikolais guard dog sure is very frustrating for Serj. Maybe a dog for his safety would be a better investment than a cat? Update soon again!
| AmShe256 9/26/10 . chapter 29
I like Herman. That's so cute that he wants to protect Nikolai from everyone. I'm glad that the bad guy didn't get a chance to rape him but what he did was still sick. I'm wondering what Nikoai's father is going to be like. You kind of made it sound like he wanted visitation earlier in the story but now it doesn't seem that way. Also how is Nikolai going to react to meeting his dad? Although there are parts were we don't see any of him, Kyle is so my favorite character. I look forward to the next chapter.
| J. A. MacKillop 9/20/10 . chapter 28
OHMYGOD! This story is amazing! I love it so much. I didn't see that coming at all! :O Thank god Nikolai's alive.
I still love the Serj/Nikolai pairing, they're so perfect together. Is Sky gay as well? :S
| blackrose214 9/20/10 . chapter 28
Hi. So, Im on nightshift again and I had the pleasure to read "To Unlock his heart". Thanks for that. Poor Nikolai... and now hes been kidnapped. We can just hope that that bastard didnt violate him before he cops got there... Nikolai deserves better. Although I have to admit my favourite characters in this story are Sky and Kyle. Is there going to be a spin-off starring Sky? And please update of course!
| rebekah5220 9/19/10 . chapter 28
Great chapter! Interesting twist as well!
| AmShe256 9/19/10 . chapter 28
Man...that sucks. At least he's still alive though I guess. I was really excited to see that you put out three chapters today. LOoking forward to the next one.
| AmShe256 9/19/10 . chapter 27
Well I didn't expect that. I think I've said this before, but poor Nickolai doesn't catch a break. I wondering if Serj couldn't just figure out what had happened between him and his mother with the way that he acts. I think it's good that he's getting his voice back.
| AmShe256 9/19/10 . chapter 26
You forgot to use your quotation marks in this one. It feels like everything is running together. I'm wondering what got Skylar so unset. Cute chapter.
| AmShe256 8/31/10 . chapter 25
I should be reading the first chapter in my Foundations of Social Wellfare book instead of the 25th chapter of To Unlock His Heart, but you know what, I do believe it is time well spent, as it always is. Gah people are jerks. That's two bruises from two different people and a threat for a possible future bruise from another. I think it would be kinda cool if Skylar couldn't go. Then it could be like a real date that they both are fully aware of. Anyway, it's your story and I'm sure anything you write will be good.
| J. A. MacKillop 8/31/10 . chapter 25
I love this story so much. Serj and Nikolai are so cute together.
Another great chapter :)
| firestar267 8/23/10 . chapter 24
This is really well developed and has a nice balance to it, all of the characters are unique and I thouight it was really well written :) I can't wait for more!