Ah, yes, good old peer pressure. The motivation that every character should have. This is an interesting beginning - I'd like to read more.

Nice! I like the very unconventional ending. :)

I really liked this. It was told amazingly well. The story progressed smoothly. I can't find any spelling or grammer mistakes, so that's good. No typos. The story was well written, and I liked the characters. Damn...can't say one constructive critism. Good job!