Please keep writing this is good stuff atleast write the story for me I loved every bit of it

so id like to begin by saying that you have such an original story. but watch out for spelling errors and such. also, when tristan and deirdre were talking, i got a little confused and lost track of who was talking. dont worry heres the best part of the review: i love the story so far! it's creative. and i love how deirdre is totally in love with tristan from the start and how you managed to avoid making it sound corny or cliche. love it!

THIS IS QUITE GOOD!

I liked how you described her feeling towards being beautiful. Very well done!

This is really good! Seriously, I've been going 'Aw' like all the chapters I've read so far.