Not your best piece of work but its still a good poem. Your writting style is different for me so maybe thats why its a bit odd for me. But I think it could have possibly been slightly longer to help more with explaing because I was confused at first. But then I understood. Good job.

XKristie MarieX

"Hoping it'll fill the void. It doesn't." Holy smokes. The angst here is palpable. I like it!

so close, and yet so far. that sucks. how's it going?