Oh my god! That was a lot to take in! Nice character descriptions though :)

Dai sounds so cute! I don't like that Emi guy and I ned to see Ivory's friend's stories!

Aw... Who hurt Shane! ): That was a really good chapter.

Aagh Adri! I love his name :)

And Ohnogod! What! Ivory is like a little kid... I really love him!

So are you gonna explain his friends? I haff to know more!

Wow, attitude! I love how Shane thinks! Great story, let us see if the next few chapters live up to this one!

That was a mean way to end a chapter *sob* Poor Sander. You sure put your boys through a lot (not that I can talk). Update soon.

That was sad. Poor boys. So is it really the end of their relationship or are they eventually going to make up? Well I'll wait. Trust me I know how homework can get.

Really well written story and definitely engaging. Wow, I am so hooked those boys do lead interesting and dramatic lives. What a cliff-hanger you have left us on here. Good luck with ur studies/hw.

Very long author's note lol, but I found the chapter in between and liked it...

Liked the chapter. So what if it was a bit hectic. Sometimes hectic can be good plus you know that I like Landon. I'm sad though that you aren't writing any romantica stories. I really like all of the characters (*sniff*). After reading about them for so long I've become really attached to them. But I like fantasy too so yeah I'll end up reading that story. Right really looking forward to your next chapter.

ahh poor shane, i was pretty sure it was his mum or sis that abused him

i think oni's in the closet ! he could be lying about the name ! lol

First I hope you're feeling better. Now as for my request...I really want you to put that person from Shane's past in! Need to meet whoever they are. And don't go putting your writing down like that. I like this story alot. Will wait for the next chapter.

Why would I want to kill you for a LONGER update? I want to kiss you for it! [on the cheek ;) ooh la la!]

The cuddling in this chapter was so awesome omg! I was all squeeing and smiling because it was so adorable -...then it got very hot ;) Omnomnomnom

Ivory is walking a very fine line now because he invaded Shane's privacy Shane so probably won't be happy...he should have asked! He'll find out because Ivory will let it slip or his brother will if they go to NYC together (which they so have to!).

Shane's friend from the past who dated Ivory so has to come back maybe if they go to NYC and he's there? or randomly meet or something?

Idk

Adrian for the suicide attempt? Because he finds out about James cheating?

And you seriously better not be updating in three weeks next D: D: D: D: It's such a cliff-hanger though D:

I can't wait to have more of Ivory being affectionate, because when he tries it's like he's a puppy...a bit Labrador puppy [and Shane's a little Pomeranian PAH].

If Edoni is in the closet that could maybe explain the whack out he had earlier in his life. Though, I'm not sure why he'd hide it from Ivory other than Ivory stealing his boyfriends xD

Ohohohoh, Ivory has to take Shane on a popper date! That'd be cute.

That's all I can think of right now (:

Update real soon!

MOARNAO

plzkthnxbai

All hot and frustrated, Shane? *hugs* Poor, poor boy. If only the rest of us had an Ivory to the rescue.

I think you're cruel leaving that ending!

I just wish Ivory would hurry up and tell him he loves him . It'd make it so much better and easier :P

How sad to see Shane regressing D: Though it is very 'Woe is me!' with him isolating himself and blaming himself xD

Anyways, update real soon!

MOARNAO

plzkthnxbai

You had to leave it there! Of all the places! *big sigh* oh well I do it enough in my stories. Can't wait to see what happens. I need to know how Ivory is going to react to Shane telling him the truth about what happened.