Well there's another turnaround. You do like coming up with the unexpected twist just when I am thinking it is not coming. I see that this is the last chapter you have up at the moment and it's been a while since you wrote it. I would like to say I've loved reading this story and it would be good if you could continue this at some stage. Thank you for all the entertainment thus far.

So Troy is glad to be going to the mall alone with Zoe, I am too, I think they would be a good match. The easy no strings relationship between Dallas and Ben is going to hit a stumbling block sooner or later, will be most interesting to see what happens then. Thanks for a good read once again.

I liked the little role reversal banter between Dallas and Ben. It was witty and very enjoyable. Great chapter.

So the "new" Zoe had led male hearts to flutter! I think it's probably a good idea that she stipulated there be no alcohol at the girls gathering, you never know where it might go. Liked this very much as usual, you always keep it interesting.

Gosh, all the stereotypes turned upside down in this chapter. You certainly know how to mix it up! Liked this.

I liked Troy's reaction to finding out that Ben and Dallas had hooked up, he sounded like an eager puppy panting for the details. I liked all the to and fro in the lunchroom. I feel poor Ashley is doomed to disappointment, be interesting to see how that goes.

Dallas was so awful to poor old Todd, I could feel his dismay just rolling off him. I liked her clash with Eileen, you could practically see the sparks in the air. And as for the scene with Ben, well, didn't that turn interesting in the blink of an eye! Always something unexpected from you, it's good.

Excellent back and forth between them in Ben's room, like a really good tennis match, the ball never hit the ground. You are a genius at conversation. Liked this lots.

Very interesting the twist you put on things with Dallas all predatory and Todd being gentleman of the year. I like your different way of thinking. Worried when I read of Ben being in an accident but your ending couple of lines dispelled that, he still has his wits about him enough to respond to Dallas so well. Good chapter once again.

Good exchange between them, you do dialogue very well. I personally don't find Dallas very lovable but that is your excellent writing working very well. You make her different from the usual clinging simpering miss. Good chapter.

Well written, I liked the exchange between Ben and Brianna. I just like Ben all round, you make him sound very honourable and just a nice guy all round. Like this.

Well that was something a bit different. I can't help thinking that Dallas is a bit on the pushy side here and backing Benjamin into a corner that he doesn't feel comfortable in. She's a bit cold blooded just wanting to find out about sex just for curiosity's sake without any real attraction for Benjamin. You portray her very well and I like the way you showcase Benjamin's reluctance as well, you make him much more lovable than Dallas. Good piece of writing.

:(... Seems like Ben's insecurities in trying to change his & Dallas' relationship is showing through his actions (which I must say was mean...but she had it coming). Sucks he's one step too late because along came oh so perfect god-like Todd -swoons-. Gotta believe in the power of lovee... and hormones x3. I'm totally giddy now. Can't wait for your next chapter!

Can't wait for ben's reaction when he finds out!

I am definitely rooting for Dallas and Todd. He is super *super* sweet. I'm in love with him. Oh heck, I'd totally go out with him if Dallas changes her mind (hope not! they're good together :D). It seems to me that Benjamin is showing some vulnerability and uncertainty in sorting out his feelings for Dallas... Ahhh, I can't wait to find out his reaction to all this when he discovers this big news ! Maybe it will shed some light to his *true* feelings for Dallas that had been lying dormant for all these years? Okay I think I am getting carried away now. Please continue your awesome story. UPDATE SOON I SHALL BE EAGERLY WAITING :P.