This is so beautiful and sad!

And here I thought, Yay! I love story from you...I should have known it'd have a bitter sweet ending. Lucky for you I like depressing stories too.

This is beautifully tragic. Don't usually like stuff that comes to a bad end, but it was done in such a pretty way. I can't say much more, but the hopeful ending was a nice touch too. Keep at it!

I love it! It's so sad and really perfect for that picture! I'll definitely put it in the archives and include it in Monday's post. :D I think I have said somewhere on the rules page that if you are inspired by any of the past pictures, there's no rule that you can't write about them as well. ;) So I'm glad you went for it!

Mara

You use some really good imagery in this! It's really thought-provoking. My only advice would be just to watch out for cliche similes like tears and rain - I've been told that similes work much better when they're very specific and unique. Overall, however, you do a really good job with being unique! I didn't expect her to kill herself; great job with the twist!

Heartbreaking story :'-(