Beautiful. I especially love the third stanza. I can emphasize

that's a nice story, I guess it could be like a oldfashion rock song, I like the starting and the being invisible thing, everybody wants to be lost sometimes.

Really cool. I actually sang this while reading. Which is different, since I don't sing much. But it gave me a good feel of the flow of this.

My favorite part:

- The debris of dreams

- Mumbled apologies

- I search for a sign

- And what comes to mind is a scene

Good stuff. I'll catch you around.

This was really beautiful. Kinda made me wanna cry.

Wow. That was beautiful.

I love these lines:

"And because we both know

It's easier to leave

A mark on oneself than a

Scratch on society"

Those were very nice. It's kind of a song about songs. Great stuff :D