I love this story, and really like your style of writing. I also really enjoyed how you put a lot of people form Greek Mythology in it, but am kinda sad you didn't have Hades in there. It could be neat to see what you would do with a desendant of Hades and Persephone. XD

As a whole I like this story, but one thing has been bugging me; if Brooke forgot all about Peyton and therefore having a roommate, what about all Peyton's stuff? Brooke was never once concerned that there was room at her flat filled with someone else's stuff and the person was never there? Or did I miss the part of the story which explained this?

Sorry to whine; like I said, I do like your story! Classics was my favourite subject at high schhol :)

Mish xx

Awww! 3

we're nearing the end D: this story was one of my favorites too.

Oh god!

I wonder if Clix is gay x) lucky for Peyton then, she has has a new gay best friend.

Loved it! :)

To be honest, I never liked the romance cheesy story type, but this one is amazing. You make it seem so effortless and smooth. The storyline is great and I love how its connected to the Greek mythology. Anyways, keep up the good work and keep writing!

Forgive me in advance for this may be a bit wordy.

I want of first say that I particularly enjoyed reading your story because your narrative voice flows. Often when I read stories from FP, with some new writers, they tend to have this choppy quality where they lack smooth transitions from one part of the story to the next which prevents the readers from being able to fully engaging in the story. So when I read yours and noted the smooth flow, I was very pleasantly surprised and appreciated the more mature tone in writing style.

I hope you don't mind me throwing in some comments and speculations:

I'm led to believe the main couple to be Peyton and Nate. And if this romance novel ends like most novels due, they are destined to be together. However you have setup the rule that Peyton cannot fall for her clients which is a pretty solid conflict (I like). As a writer, you can always bend the rules (the easy way around it) but I've found that the truly satisfying endings often are ones that are logical and consistent without dismissing the setup. It's challenging but I'm looking forward to the clever way you will make that happen. And if per chance the couple doesn't end up together, I'm sure some readers that have been rooting for the couple would be upset. It takes good quality writing to be able to give a satisfying ending without the readers feeling cheated in their investment in the main couple. I've read some that made me feel like they kicked me off a moving train without a proper explanation.

But with the way you've been writing, I'm not doubting that I will have a very pleasant story to look forward to. I must say I rather like the friendship storyline with Brook and Peyton. Especially the new curve that Brook does not remember Peyton anymore. Can't wait to read more about that. I also wouldn't mind having one of Peyton's dates to really be a contender for Peyton's heart. Good rivalry always makes a love story more fun to read. Some guy that really gives Nate a run for his money.

Sorry if I've said too much. I unfortunately am stuffing twenty chapter's worth of thoughts into one review so I ask you forgive me. Can't wait to read more.

That's so sweet of him. :D

Oooh, Nate, huh... Things are getting more interesting :D

OMG!

I loved the ending :)

so cute :D

can't wait for more! c:

oh dang!

it certainly did just get interesting.

can't wait for more! :)

Dang it Peyton!

Why can't you see Nate is perfect for you :(

can't wait for more :)

It's so sad to not love the one you love. :( Peyton can be so blunt. XD

I LOVE this story, it keeps getting better. I'm so gutted she's not friends with Brooke anymore, I hope they can re-make friends..if that makes any sense :)

NATE AND PEYTON kissed! :O yay! Lily needs to go away!

Keep up the AMAZING work!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Jade

xoxo

TEAM NATE AND PEYTON :)

Oh dang...

Nate, break up with her already! D:

For an angel, she sure is a bitch :/

Can't wait for more!

I wanna deck her in the face ... what a bitch