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| Reviews for New Girl |
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   iamLouieDaWeirdo 8/9/12 . chapter 11Awww... really awesome story... Aiden and Lizzie... Super Dupers cute! asdfghjkl and yet another awesome story from you! |
| brokendollhouse 1/29/11 . chapter 11 Omg I just read the whole story and I loved it so much |
| Dena'sMelody 12/17/10 . chapter 2 Loved this chapter (XD I have that shirt btw... the one with "Epic Fail" with an arrow pointing to the side) |
| boredsoul34 12/9/10 . chapter 11 your story is really good and has a lot of potential. one thing i noticed is that it lacks emotion. when her mom comes at her with a knife, or is sentenced to 6 years in prison, its all written factually. you don't sense the emotional and physical pain Elizabeth has to live with. i'm sorry if it sounds harsh! you have a lot of potential! |
| SecretPassion 11/19/10 . chapter 11 I like the stories but I think that they are far too rushed. I like the summary and everything but they r too rushed sorry |
| 3DarkGoddess3 10/29/10 . chapter 11 Cute story. |
| chewychester 9/11/10 . chapter 11 It's a good story. I had to read on, but I don't like Elizabeth, not that anything is wrong with her, but she is the type I love to hate I guess. |
| Brttny98 8/21/10 . chapter 11 This was so sweet :) I want an Aiden haha. great story |
| Vivi Fontaine 8/6/10 . chapter 11 i lovie lovie lovie this story! |
| RomanticGirl17 8/4/10 . chapter 11 its so0o0o0o0o nice! I love it! go0d job! Keep writing, okay? |
| amy269 8/3/10 . chapter 11 Aw... Im so glad that she got her happy ending after all that she went through. Great job with the story! |
| Unanorak 8/1/10 . chapter 11 Great story, I would've been mad if I had to wait for updates, it kept me reading. Great job! |
| Daiseyyy 8/1/10 . chapter 1 After all the beating, I think she should have given her mom hell. I mean if I was put in her situation, I would of yelled at her or somthing. But knowing that she wanted the emancipation, she had to be civil. Even though I thought the ending was kind of rushed, you did a great job! Thanks for the FUN! |
| ebs12 8/1/10 . chapter 11 this is a nice idea and a good story but in some places it feels like you're more interested in describing the band t-shirts elizabeth is wearing. the characters havn't been built up and neither have any of their relationships. it was a good plot though so sorry if you think i'm being harsh |
| toryaborya 7/19/10 . chapter 5 Wow . ! I have got to say that was intense! . I really thought that the mom was going to stab her! I think that is really messed up that the mom is abusive. I hope she gets what's coming to her in the next chapter, and is thrown into jail! But, I am really liking your story! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work! :) |
