I'm taking a mythology class right now and we talk frequently about the male gods, particularly Zeus, who liked to trick mortal women into sleeping with them. In Greek mythology it seems that women always get the blame (Pandora, for instance, even though it was Prometheus' fault because he stole fire from the gods...) anyway, I like this story because e talked about Ariadne in class. :) and, I like the short chapters too!

I'm taking a mythology class right now and we talk frequently about the male gods, particularly Zeus, who liked to trick mortal women into sleeping with them. In Greek mythology it seems that women always get the blame (Pandora, for instance, even though it was Prometheus' fault because he stole fire from the gods...) anyway, I like this story because e talked about Ariadne in class. :) and, I like the short chapters too!

I loved your rendition of the tale of Theseus and the Minotaur and Ariadne. How you told it so that it wasn't that she was naive and thought Theseus loved her, or that she was scared of her brother. I also really liked the way you told her relationship with Dionysus. Thumbs up for you and your awesome stories :)

Hi.

I'm just here to tell you that I made a vid about Ariadne based on your story with full credit to you, of course.

www. you tube watch?vHPX38fYoGPA

aww poor ariadne, don't be a jekr icarus!

very very epic. loved it! can't wait for a update :D

This sounds interesting !

tis is good! pleae update!

The best one so far. And it asks a very good question in the end.

These short chapters work well here. This is good.

A sort but interesting opening. I liked it.

Hmm.., this a very interesting piece you have written. It's very descriptive and it makes me feel how the character feeling at this very moment. There is just one thing I would suggest try to give a little more dramatic events within each chapter.