This is astounding.

"And we have hands." Damn. There's just something so striking about this line; it's simple, and perhaps that's why I like it, because the speaker is in awe of another person, touching them, exploring them for the first time-it's beautiful. :)

Intriguing. I get this image of a group of friends hanging out in a rundown apartment. My favorite stanza is the last one - really interesting images and it's very seductive. Keep writing! :)