I just started reading your story today, I know you haven't updated in about a year, but I hope you continue this story!

i hope who ever they bring to 'pop out' his baby gives them a run for their money. ;)

I really like your story so far...

Nice cliffhanger at the end. Why was the gray witch so willing to be on the Dark Lord's Cabinet? Haha Dark Lord reminds me of Voldemort.

Nice prologue. Is this related to Mother of the Heir in any way? I ask because Caedus's enemy is Constantine and in MOTH he seems to have a lot of enemies in the vampiric world. Anyways, great job at portraying Caedus. The whole moonlight setting gave it a very mysterious and eerie feel.