Wow, I'm usually not crazy about reading second person, but I think you did it quite well. Cute story!

LOL YAY. So exciting when they're SO STRAIGHT... except they're not. I thought this was super cute. Cliched, whatever, but still. Very cute. I like second person. It used to make me feel awkward, but I recently started to really like it. Nice job :D

Very very well written!

It was really sweet maybe a little too short but well writen !

I really liked this! It was great. Short yes, but it is a one-shot. You're a great writer. I got all these tingly feelings when reading this and I always see that as a good sign. Write more like this!