You need to work on your spelling...it's kinda irritating to read it. And this story lacks emotion.

But continue writing so that you will improve.

Another great story, keep up the lovely work! I look forward to your next story :)

good story D well written, a bit shorter then i would of liked, but good!

You're a gem, thank you for making it a happy ending. Although we are left wondering if Adel needs to use the back up plan, it was still satisfying. Stacey is a hero, Adel is beautiful and Morgan, is where she should be... dusted.

what a great chapter, that was amazing how you involved all that. I was sure it was Stacey that killed those vagrants for Adel. I am glad Morgan is out of Adel's life and Stacey didn't kill Adel. I'm hope for a happy ending, but I've read a few, not holding my breath

I love that Stacey is protective of Adel, but sad she won't confess.

This is kinda hot, a 3 way relationship perhaps. Very interesting

The story was amazing. Not how I expected it to go. It was amazing and can not wait to see what you write next.

damn interesting story! and Stacy needs to kick some ass and claim whats hers! hope you update soon

So far I love it. Can not wait to see where this goes. Also can't wait to see what's up with Stacey and this Morgan chick. Update soon. :)