who. that is good.

A couple grammar corrections:

In the title, "Battel" should be spelled "Battle", and there should be a space after the comma.

Sorry, I don't have a lot of experience with poetry, but I'm guessing it's about a failed relationship?

It's very well written, though; even though I suck at interpreting poetry, I can appreciate the language.

Love the ending. We don't need you to say them to know the three words. Lovely.