I have to admit that this is one of my favorite stories on fictionpress, so I'm really disappointed that it's been so long since you updated. I hope you eventually get back to this story.

-Shama

Aww. A dead body. I wonder who it is, b/c its obviously not Elias. There are no more chapters! You must update at once! I love this story too much to give up on, and neither should you! I want to know what happens! Please update soon!

Fenrir

I feel so bad for Eva. I couldnt help but to cry a little bit at the letter her dad left. She truely is all alone...And a deal Hm? What an odd suggestion... Ah, so suspenseful...And do I feel a bit of love? Hm?..? No? Aw... Oh well, I tried. XD

Fenrir

Awww... I kinda wanted the other Rusalka to get Elias. Only b/c he seemed nicer...I dont know lol XD He seemed more appealing for the mind for some reason. Lol Im weird I know. ;] Well yet another great chapter! On to the next!

Fenrir

Oh my. Poor Elias. Poor Eva. Aww... now shes all alone. (Beside from her friend.) Sadness mixed with suspense. The best mix in my opinion. :] Well, lets see what happens! Next chapter

Fenrir

Oh my, My heart is pounding! Such suspense! I love it. -Devious Smirk- I must know what happens! I would do the same as he if I were trying to protect someone dear to me. Well, great chapter, and on to the next one!

Fenrir

Wow. I wish I had the creativity that you do to come up with such real-sounding creatures. Oh how Ive found a wonderful story Im very hard to pleasen you know. Hehehe XD

Fenrir

I want to know why he smells good to the demon...is it because its his mate?

Just read through this & i must say THIS is one awesome story! I love the darkness ,the gore ,the overall morbidness & of course the erm..."fluff"? I'll keep reviewing so keep up the amazing work!

cheers!

update soon?

update soon.

FAVED! fantastic! im happy i stumbled over this lil gem, i found it in one of those commuties.

update soon ok? i cant wait to see what happens next.

woah.

brilliant, hes going to a deal.

brilliant, this is exciting. these are strange beasts, they remind of thatthird 'pirates of the carribean' movie, the half mammal/human sailors on that octopus guys ship.

anyways, smart move elias with the flower scent. though wouldnt the rain wash the smell away? i was going to suggest elias hide his scent some way tooo, like when arnold swazenger covers his skin with mud in that 'predator' movie.