|Reviews for Easy As Breathing|
| songbirdalice 5/16/11 . chapter 1
The style is odd, but I can adjust to it. Your structure is off, it's like you wrote a paragraph then pressed enter so that it looked like a poem. Other than that it is pretty good :)
| MyMoodRingIsPurple 7/20/10 . chapter 1
wow. I wish I was as good as a writer as you. Really really good.
| Spiral-Girl 7/18/10 . chapter 1
I really like this poem. But im not really sure why. I think its got good rhythm and uses intriguing words. Its kinda spellbinding