Hi! Thanks for leaving a review on No Hero, I appreciate it :)

I really like this poem. It's beautifully written, and I like how you're not afraid to tell it like it is. We could all do with bettering our lives.

I chose to review this poem because I saw that it was lacking in reviews, and I'm wondering why, because it's a very good poem. Keep up the good work!

I like how the two first verses seem so heavenly and happy, then you put on the last verse that we live in sin... It's true, I suppose. I'm not very religious, but I liked this poem. It just sounded so carefree and... innocent. I loved loved LOVED this line:

'We're passing out peace like we're passing out hugs'

- It just had that childish, peacefull air about it. Loved it! Great job :D

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