| Reviews for Wondrous Creature of the Night |
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Topaz-Raven 7/24/10 . chapter 1A couple spelling errors but nothing too serious. I like this poem though. The line-"And lighten where gloom was deepening" which is describing the moonlight penetrating the forest floor is one of the best lines I think. Good sensory description of both the moonlight and of course the bat. |
this wild abyss 7/18/10 . chapter 1Interesting. I'm not really into bats, but what you've written here made them extremely beautiful and realistic. Great work! |