Aw! Finding love again afer it tears apart everything... it's hopeful and refreshing. What's the meaning behind the third line being in italics? Just curious. Anyway, interesting piece, good job!

wow...amazing poem. very well done. please write more. a lesson learned, a poem made.

I liked the authoritative tone of the poem, it seemed protective and a little maternal because of the familiarity of "Silly little boy."

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