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a99515 6/29/11 . chapter 9Two short of a chapter other than that you did fine |
a99515 4/5/11 . chapter 8A much better chapter. The action is belivable,the flow is very good and best of all no typos. you are doing great. |
a99515 3/23/11 . chapter 7Another fine chapter the story is unfolding like oil on water |
a99515 3/23/11 . chapter 5nice chapter |
a99515 3/23/11 . chapter 4you could have done away with the underline with a short note about who this chapter was about. |