|Reviews for Fair|
| a99515 6/29/11 . chapter 9
Two short of a chapter other than that you did fine
| a99515 4/5/11 . chapter 8
A much better chapter. The action is belivable,the flow is very good and best of all no typos. you are doing great.
| a99515 3/23/11 . chapter 7
Another fine chapter the story is unfolding like oil on water
| a99515 3/23/11 . chapter 5
| a99515 3/23/11 . chapter 4
you could have done away with the underline with a short note about who this chapter was about.