|Reviews for The Tarachian Days Book 1: The Slaves of Zachavi|
| Gentle 8/21/11 . chapter 38
YES! They're finally free.
| TeddyBearKing1993 8/21/11 . chapter 38
elves...how love can f**k them up
| XxKyuubiRoxX 8/20/11 . chapter 38
I think I'm seriously in love with this story right now! Please update soon? :)
| SJR 8/20/11 . chapter 16
Not at all cheesy - thought it was a good selection that added realism to the race whilst continuing to keep that inherent elf-ness of traditional elven society :D
| SJR 8/20/11 . chapter 2
Lol I like your princess - she likes to think she isn't royalty but she still expects to get her way all the time :D I like it. There were a few typo-esq problems both in this chapter and the last but nothing. Also sometimes there's a tendency for the narrative to switch like you're looking at the world through the eye's of Ranaya but then all of a sudden, for two lines, you get the opinions of the Stable manager and it's a little odd - does that make sense? I tried to explain it concisely but I think I failed.
Anyways :D I'm still enjoying it so keep up the good work - I'm off to read Chapter 2!
| rEdRoSeSiNaUgUst 8/19/11 . chapter 38
Well that was a bit short but good nonetheless :)
Although Ranaya needs to tell Lando bout the baby. Soon.
| Tazy 8/18/11 . chapter 37
Wow this story is amazing! I feel like I'm reading a professionally written novel! You need to make this into a real book, your writing abilities are truly a gift. please update! I read this every day!
| TeddyBearKing1993 8/18/11 . chapter 37
i think you should've prolonged the fight a bit but still a good story.
| TheWriterInDisguise 8/18/11 . chapter 37
Yaaaaay! Their there! Who's the man? Is he a one-off character or will he come in later? So many questions that can only be answered by reading on! Thanks for ye longer chapter :) Keep writing. xx
| rEdRoSeSiNaUgUst 8/17/11 . chapter 37
Gaaaaaahhhhhh! HURRY UP! You evil person!
Just so you know i looooooooove the story:))))))
| TheWriterInDisguise 8/17/11 . chapter 36
Yay! They're out! I'm glad Naylandi knows she's married to Lando. Are they really free or are you going to be mean and have them caught again? Please be nice! I low this story and I'm maybe just a touch obsessed? Hehe...
| rEdRoSeSiNaUgUst 8/17/11 . chapter 36
For me, the story is a little bit rushed in some areas. Other than that, it's a good one :)
Ranayna needs to get her ass back to Lando (I have to admit but I laughed the first time I saw his name. Y'know...Star Wars)
| TeddyBearKing1993 8/16/11 . chapter 36
woo hooo yes yes they're free...
| TeddyBearKing1993 8/15/11 . chapter 33
I hate Karik so much. grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
| TeddyBearKing1993 8/15/11 . chapter 35
nice chapter. things are heating up