This is so amazing! Oh my gosh, I love these two characters. They couldn't be more perfect for each other! All their arguments, their swearing, and their love is so awesome that I just want to die! This is perfection; I love it :D

That's so simple yet...somehow deep. It touched me. It is so realistic and believable. I so frickin love it.

You don't make their character shallow and perfect. It has depth, no-nonsense, and enticing realistic flaws to them. And you make this story to the point without some rubbish to stall it. They are like fire against fire. You make it work. Not to fluffy or mushy, but sweet in twisted way.

Well, keep up the great work dude.

Dee

I LOVE IT! It is very funny!

I loved this one-shot...especially how you grouped each section by the stages of a relationship. You made me love the characters through and through. :) And I absolutely loved the story too. Great job!

Adorable. The cussing was a bit repetitive and annoying but I think it added to their character. ;) Good job!

This is an unbelievably sweet one-shot. I love the interaction between the characters - it was understated in a good, realistic way, and the way your main characters sort of "click" together is perfect and completely cute.

I love this format, too, where you jump forward in key scenes in their relationship - not necessarily the "big events," but just moments that really exemplify how they play off of each each other.

Beautiful! Adding to my favorites. :)

adorable!

All I can say is Elena is a my new role model for me :D Yeah I loved her, and the whole story.

5 stars

so funny ! love it !

This is really good. The characters are just so interesting, and their relationship is different than most would expect. I think the only issue is that they might be a little too similar.

Very creative and clever! Nice job!

Their relationship is so cute! I love how Elena is bold!:)

That was really good. It was romantic and sweet but not the same as every other romantic and sweet story. And I loved the stages that you had them go through. They added a lot to the story and helped it flow really nicely.

Great job!

that's such a cute oneshot lol :)

it was really well written