I'm lame and typically don't even bother reading poems because, I don't know, I feel like a dolt when it comes to forming an opinion about them.

However, I really really liked this one. It made me want to read it out loud (I didn't though, too many people around...)

It was wonderful. Thanks for sharing it.

I wish I could be more detailed and give a better review, but I just don't know how to!

that was very cool, for lack of a better word to describe it. I liked it a lot, the flow was great, i liked the runniness (I'm not sure if you actually meant for it to be that way?), super word choices