This poem made me chuckle. This totally sounds like something I would write, except that I am not fortunate enough to have my own car or a job. xD

hehe interesting ...some of the lines feel more forced but not a bad lil poem. hope tomorrow is a better day for ya!

hm...well, that's life!

*cat eyes stare from the darkness* Interesting! Is your life really like that? If it is that life sucks. *oops* SORRY! *eyes blink out*

Haha. Loved it!

Hilarious!

I hate stories about peoples lives! Its getting anoying! But this one was acuttlaly good.

Hey, here's a random question.. but how do you get the "my interests" on yahoo? I could never get it back on there _ lol thank you for adding me to your favorites. I reckon you should write more poems! But your stories are very well done and I shall read the other broken doll series.. you're a wicked writer _ This was written ages ago but meh, it has a nice rhyme scheme and I'm sure if you wrote more poems you'd be dazzling. Hehe..
Jenna xx

's how your day begins?I hope your days become fic.

Love the comment about the car.