|Reviews for Not Your Grandma's Justice League|
| Thequietninja 6/10/13 . chapter 26
I love this story so much! It's so sad that it has to come to an end. . . .T.T Boo! hoo! hoo. . .!
| mooglemog96 6/9/13 . chapter 26
THIS IS THE BEST STORY IN THE WHOLE FUDGING WORLD! *cries while applauding*
| Guest 10/16/12 . chapter 26
| notjustink 8/25/12 . chapter 26
Hey, just found this story on adropofromeo, and it is FANTASTIC. Seriously. Callie is hilarious, and Jack is like the leading male character in every fangirl's daydream. Annnd I would love to see the next chapter, so update soon!
| foodieriana 8/19/12 . chapter 26
Okay well I just started reading this story a couple hours ago and I'm totally in love it. I always loved superheros and I always wished that someone could create a realistic story about one on fictionpress and you did. I love Callie and Jack together! Their chemistry is great and how there's like meetings for superheros is genius! I know you haven't updated in a while so I guess you're busy with whatever you're busy with but I hope you update soon! Yeah and again, yourstoryisamazingandireally loveit
| fellintothemoon 8/19/12 . chapter 1
Hey there. This is Melissa from A Drop of Romeo. Your story has been added to our archive under the Fantasy/Supernatural category! Yay! Here's you review:
Melissa Thinks: We all love a good hero. After being saved from a mugging by the local super Blue Blaze, Callie seems to be getting more attention than she was before by those in her school. Rumors of sex and pregnancy soon surface and things get a little hectic. I think we've all wondered how no one ever sees through Superman's crappy disguise. In Not Your Grandma's Justice League, Callie turns out to be smarter than most in a superhero's world and so when she runs into another student named Jackson, she can imeadiately tell that he is in fact the Blue Blaze. Now that she knows his secret, how will their relationship proceed?
One of the funniest stories I've ever read! The inner workings of Callie's mind is a strange, yet witty place to be for the reader. As a character, she seemed very authentic, as is her relationship with Jack (Blue Blaze). This seems to be a more realisticish version of popular comic books that can be a bit out there to me sometimes. It has quirky chapter titles and easy to get through chapters; you'll fly right through this story! Jack and Callie together are too cute. At the end, you'll be wanting a superhero of your own to call a boyfriend. Maybe a few wording and grammar problems here and there might catch your eye, but it's no matter: the pros outweight the cons in this case.
| LDS Dreamer 4/3/12 . chapter 26
I know this might be rude and all, but, UPDATE! This is really cool! I love superheroes and I just want to say that when dealing with superheroes, it's okay to make up places and how a court goes. Haha. Great job! Now UPDATE!
| Bubbly Girl 3/10/12 . chapter 1
Everytime I listen to the song Superman by Taylor Swift, this story pops up into my head! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
| Bubbly Girl 2/20/12 . chapter 26
Oh My Goodness! You seriously NEED to update this story! I need to know what happens in the last chapter! Please update soon! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
| jasminesurf 1/18/12 . chapter 26
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. Just spent the last God knows how many hours reading all the chapters. :) Honestly, I can't really think of any constructive criticism except awesome. I love your writing style and Callie cracks me up.
| QuirkyGurl 12/9/11 . chapter 23
"He sighed like I should already know this. "When we get back, I'll just rewind time and they'll forget it ever happened. ""
Hold the phone, mister. Time travel isn't that simple. I've read too much Douglass Adams to let this pass.
Out of all the infinite scenarios I've picked the first three that come to mind (lol)
Scenario 1: They return to Nebraska and rewind time. This rewinds EVERYTHING that's happened and Jack is still in jail.
Scenario 2: They return to Nebraska and rewind time. The time rewind is only isolated and only a few are affected but, you know, that's really stupid because of the human interaction factor and that would probably destroy the universe.
Scenario 3: They return to Nebraska and rewind time. Everything is rewound but they're somehow in 2 places at once allowing them to both be at court and in Nebraska (Harry Potter style). This is also filled with problems, because they're in 2 places at once and that means that there could be a ton of Bens running around at once if he ended up going back too far. Then you have continuity issues and it's all very bleh.
Sorry to overwhelm you.
| helen deliutza 10/1/11 . chapter 26
Wjere is the next chapter?
| helen deliutza 9/30/11 . chapter 11
what does mean PDA?
| helen deliutza 9/30/11 . chapter 8
What does mean ASAP?
| CupCake34 9/9/11 . chapter 1
Love the start! Ahhhhh she sounds like me with the whole coffee issue. If I don't have my daily cup I warn people about how mean I will be :) haha anyways good job!