|Reviews for Waiting Room|
| elizabeth 7/24/10 . chapter 1
love your different style of writting
| 0-C.L.A.M.-0 7/23/10 . chapter 1
What a hopeless story...
It speaks to me, bro. XD
| Mirabella 7/22/10 . chapter 1
Brilliant surprising ending! I thought it would be sad still at the end but the waiting hope was a lovely addition.
Vivid and descriptive imagery. It definitey leaves a mark.
I like how you described the shooting star as a dying star. :)