"What the hell am I going to do for the rest of the night? I could always sharpen my knives. Actually if I sharpen them just a bit more there won't be anything left."

HAHAHA okay I'm sorry, but this stuff is AWESOMENESS D I love this girl.

First dialogue! Surprisingly, I didn't miss the interactions! I was glued to this story, obviously because of the protagonist. Great chapter (:

x mandy

Okay i officially like this girl! She's really cool D And has some SERIOUS anger management issues.. ;)

x mandy

I really like the summary, that's what drew me in!

The protagonist seems pretty awesome; I like her (I'm assuming it's a girl) dry sense of humor, she's the type that can be funny without trying!

Would love to read more (:

x mandy

So far it's pretty good. Update!

I love your character already. And I don't even know the name.

There's lots of suspense early in the story, which I like. (Loved your summary, too, by the way.)

I couldn't find any grammar mistakes... so kudos to you.

I really can't find anything wrong with it. Which kind of annoys me. Well, makes me jealous, at least.

I'll definitely keep reading.

Hope you update soon.