Interesting! I liked the style that was used. I mean, you never here the other side of alien stories. It's nice to have a change of perspective. Well done!

BTW: Since I'm new to the site, I don't know how to edit my current stories without re-publishing them. Could you send me instructions on how to do so? Thanks and shalom!

WOW! love love love LOVE this one! Gave me the shivers! :D I don't have a single correction or suggestion for this one, really great job! :)