Thanks for the wonderful story! I think you should have this made into a book and get it published! You can even sell it on iBooks.

GREAT chapter i just wish u would finish writing a little quicker... i've been waiting for the other chapters for a long while...pretty exciting story!

Wow...just wow. I usually don't like stories like this but I love this one! I am completely hooked and I doubt I'll be able to survive if you don't update soon! Your writing style is very sophisticated and I could not for the life of me find any spelling errors (not that I was trying too hard, I was totally enthralled). Overall amazing story and I really hope you have a chance to update soon, for my mental health's sake. :)

i really love yoyr story you write it in a way that i feel like im the one its happening to,i really hope that this ends hapilly ever after lol i really cant help it but in every story i want it to end that way...i loooooooooooovvvvvveeeee your stiry...update soon...thnx

I don't like the romance between Leon and Mary. Leon just...annoys me, simple as that. Bastion and Mary are meant to be after everything they've been through in the last story and this one. Is it weird if I say I can feel the connection between them? I hope not. The characters are shaped and made out so perfectly I can imagine them beautifully.
It's been a year since you updated, but I really wish you will update soon, as you can count on me to read your story!
With love3

Omg post a new chapter! I am desperate here! I need to know what happens next!

please please please UPDATE! OMG THIS STORY IS SO SAD, YET AT THE SAME TIME, ITS FULL OF COMPASSION AND LOVE AND HAPPINESS AND ANGST! hurry and update! i love this story!

Please PLEASE REVIEW !

Your story is by far the BEST on fiction Press ! Soo Clever the plot , everything about it ! So am just Surprised that you stopped updating ? , why ? , if you even got this published ( and the story before ) i would Buy it ! For sure ! XD I NEED to know what happens , and am sure a lot of your other Fans would agree to , so please put us out of this Misery , and UPDATE ! ( Sorry with the caps , I don't mean to be rude , just ...desperate ). Thanks for you've written so far though , it was a beautiful journey ...while it lasted.

Peace Tc xo

I hope Bastion and Mary will be safe in the next chapter. Can't wait for it:)

Things are starting to ge craaazy...er... :P I hate and love th love triangle all at the same tmie! I can't wait to see what happens :)

wow this was intense poor Leon and i hope Mary got in to Berkeley and i knew it i knew Leon wasn't over her Ugh i hate love triangles especially when there both really great guys its so hard to pick a favorite cause i like them both Please update asap can't get enough of this

ASDLFUHASDKLFJSD I LOVE THIS WAY TOO MUCH. MORE. PLEASE. BASTION. LEON. BASTION. LEON. WHICH. ONE. ALSDJFLSKJ PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON

WONDERFUL!

i still love this story!

OH MY GOSH *SQUEAL* the last few bitsof Dialogue made me wanna scream! ! ! !

i forgot how much i loved this storyy! ! !

i'm glad you updated :)

love yo x

It's surprising, considering who's involved, how smoothly everything went.

Is it wrong if I say I want the gooey sweet relationship Mary and Bastion had in Obsession? (also, I noticed the initials of Obsession is TOOL.)